[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 18일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. It was really hot today.

I drove to my office. It took 30mins from my house to my office. I parked my car in the parking lot. I am good at driving. But I don't drive these days, because there is a lot of traffic. Anyway, I wrote my name at the information desk of my office building. And then I entered my office. Expectedly, there was nobody. I turned on the air conditioner and I turned on my computer.

First of all, I looked up some words on Naver dictionary. I took some notes. They were verbs. I wanted to look them up, because I didn't know their past and past participle forms.

Second, I prepared for level 2. I checked Talk-Talk Academy's Instagram account and I listened to the voice recordings for level 2. Third, I reviewed Shawn's comment on my diaries.

I left my office to come home. I drove my car again. I quickly came back home.

I wanted to take a nap but I couldn't sleep. I just got out of my bed. Around 5pm, my family went to my dad's house to have dinner. We picked my dad up and we went to a restaurant. We had dinner.After dinner, we dropped him off in front of my dad's house.

Today, I spent the whole day studying. It is fun to learn English. Of course, it is hard for me to learn English.

After writing this diary, I will practice reading my textbook out loud.

Good bye.

PS. Shawn! Thank you, as always ~^^

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'But I didn't drive these days. Because there was a lot of traffic.' -> Rewrite it!

2. 'information' -> 'information desk'

3. 'It was word's past sentence and the past perfect sentence.' -> 'They were verbs. I wanted to look them up, because I didn't know their past and past participle forms.

4. 'voice recordings about level 2.' -> 'voice recordings for level 2.'

5. 'Shawn's comment in my diaries.' -> 'Shawn's comments on my diaries.'

6. 'So I just woke up in my bed.' -> 'So I just got out of my bed.'

7. 'Around 5pm, My family' -> Rewrite it!

8. 'To learn English is fun.' -> 'It is fun to learn English.'

9. 'Naturally, I am sometimes hard for me to study English.' -> 'Of course, it is hard for me to learn English.'

[hichunhee]

1. But I didn't drive these days. Because there was a lot of traffic.' ->

   these days 이니깐 현재형으로 ;;;;

   But I don't drive these days, Because there is a lot of traffic.

[shawn-hy1232]

'But I don't drive these days, Because there is a lot of traffic.' -> 'But I don't drive these days, because there is a lot of traffic.