shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'I drank a coffee late at night.' -> 'I drank a cup of coffee late at night.'
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'I took on the bus.' -> 'I got on the bus.'
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'I wanted to go to the gallery.' -> 'I wanted to go to a gallery.'
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'It is best to rest my house in summer.' -> 'It is best to stay at home in summer.' 집에서 쉬다 -> rest라는 동사를 써도 되는데'rest at my house' 전치사 꼭 붙어야되요!
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'At 5PM. I slept for a while. So I Woke up back at 8PM.' -> 'At 5pm, I slept for a while. And I woke up at 8pm.' 대소문자랑, 쉼표 조심~
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I couldn’t sleep last night. Because I drank a cup of coffee late at night. So I watched Netflix all night. In the morning, I studied English and I took a shower and I washed the dishes. And I walked to the bus station. I waited for the bus and I got on the bus. I went to Talk-Talk. I didn’t go to the class last week. So I was worried about my English. After the class, I came back home. I wanted to go to a gallery. But It was hot today. It is best to stay at home in summer. I had a burger for lunch and I took a break. At 5pm, I slept for a while. And I woke up at 8pm. I met my friend and we wanted to eat dinner. And we decided a menu. We had 돼지갈비 for dinner. And we had ice cream for dessert. And I came back home and I slept.