[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 19일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work. My colleagues and I didn't have our weekly meeting, because of COVID-19. So, we worked at each of our own seats. And we kept our masks on.

At lunch time, we had delivery food. The delivery food didn't taste good. After lunch, I checked my diaries. And I read Shawn's comments. I usually get nervous, when I read his comment. After reading my diaries, I corrected my diaries based on Shawn's comments. It was very helpful for me.

I went down to the first floor of my office building to drink coffee. EDIYA cafe is on the 1st floor. I grabbed iced-latte and then I walked up to the second floor. I walked there for few mins. I came back to my office.

This afternoon, I was free. So I checked some documents. I found any problems with this documents.

Around 5pm, I got a text message from my colleague. He went on a business trip to Daegu.

He told me and said " I finished my work well. So I will go back to Seoul by KTX. I will see you tomorrow morning."

or (He told me that he finished his work and he will go back to Seoul by KTX. He said " I will see you tomorrow morning" )

And I said " Good job! See you tomorrow "

Now, I am at my office. All of my colleagues got off work. So It is a good time to study English. After writing this diary, I will practice reading my textbook.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'My colleagues and I didn't have our weekly meeting. Because COVID-19.' -> 'My colleagues and I didn't have our weekly meeting, because of COVID-19.'

2. 'And we kept on our masks.' -> 'And we kept our masks on.'

3. 'we had a delivery food.' -> food is uncountable.

4. 'comment' -> 'comments'

5. '1th floor' -> '1st floor'

6. 'I was free after a long time.' -> 'I was free.'

7. 'I found any problems with this documents.' -> ??

8. 'He told me that he finished his work well and he will go back to Seoul by KTX. He said " I will see you tomorrow morning" -> Good! Just cross out 'well'

[hichunhee]

I found any problems with this documents.' -> ??

I found a mistake in this documents.

문서에서 틀린곳을 발견했다. 입니다