[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 20일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today, it was really hot. It was about 35 degrees.

I went to work. This morning, I checked some documents and then I organized the documents. But, I didn't understand some documents. So I sent an email to my lawyer. As soon as I sent an email to him. I called him to explain. And I talked on the phone with him. He told me that he will be on a summer vacation tomorrow. So he promised to reply to my email next week.

At lunch time, all of my colleagues and I had delivery food for lunch. I went to my conference room to have lunch. I had lunch while reading my diary's comments on my phone. After lunch, I brushed my teeth and went down to the second floor. Second floor place is so wide. I walked around there for few mins.

This afternoon, my boss came to work. He wanted to have a business meeting. So my boss and some of my colleagues had a meeting.

Around 5:30 pm, I got off work. I went to Talk-Talk by subway. I took English class for 2 hours. At the beginning of my class, I read my diaries. And Shawn explained me his comments in detail. And then he asked me some questions in English. But I didn't understand what he told me. He always makes me nervous. This time was very interesting. Finally we finished our textbook level 1. l learned about Past tense. It was so good. He looks happy when he teaches English. Of course, I really like this time to learn English.

After the class, I walked home.

I am very tired. Because I didn't sleep well recently. So I am going to bed now.

Sweet dream !

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'this documents.' -> 'the documents.'

2. 'At once I talked on the phone with my lawyer.' -> ??

3. 'he will go to on a summer vacation tomorrow.' -> Rewrite it!

4. 'I went to my conference room to had lunch.' -> Rewrite it!

5. 'He wanted to have business meeting.' -> 'He wanted to have a business meeting.'

6. 'And then he asked some questions in English.' -> 'And then he asked me some questions in English.' (4형식) ~에게 ~ Reference Link

7. 'He always gives me nervous.' -> 'He always makes me nervous.'

8. 'He seems to be happy' -> 'He looks happy'

[shawn-hy1232]

1. 'he will go to a summer vacation tomorrow.' -> 'he will be on a summer vacation tomorrow.'