shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'He told me that he was fine.' -> 'He told me that he is fine.' (Tip: he was fine 으로 해석하면 '그는 괜찮았었다고 말했다.' 이러면 그 말을 한 시점 이전에는 괜찮았었지만 그 말한 시점에는 안괜찮았다는 것으로 들려요. 그렇기 때문에 과거가 아니라 현재로 가야되요.)
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'We are same team.' -> 'We are on the same team.'
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'So I often helped him to do work.' -> Rewrite it!
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'One of them is going to be father soon.' -> 'One of them is going to be a father soon.'
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'And one of them is internship.' -> ??
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
Today, it was really hot. It was especially hot today.
On the way to my office, I talked on the phone with my dad for a while. I asked after him. He told me that he is fine.
I went to work early. This morning, I was free. But my junior staff was busy. We are on the same team. So I often help him with his work.
At lunch time, my junior staff odered some food on his phone. The app name is Baemin. All of my colleagues had delivery food for lunch. My colleagues had lunch at each of our own seats. But I had lunch at our meeting room alone. I checked my diary over the meal.
Around 1 pm, the three tax accountants visited our company. I was glad to see them. We had a business meeting. I told them about our company. They worked at my meeting room for 5 hours. One of them is going to be a father soon. And one of them is an intern.
Now, It's 6pm. All of tax accountants are still working. So my junior staff and I can't get off work. Maybe, I will get off work late. From now on, I will stop writing this diary.
Good bye.