[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 22일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was scorching today.

When I woke up, I had a little headache. Because my son bought a watermelon and beer from 하나로마트 late last night. So my son and I drank beer.

I went to work early. There was nobody. So, while I was listening to piano music, I did my homework quickly. It was sentences analysis.

Two of my colleagues are on a summer vacation. One of my colleagues had a day off. Because he suddenly had a fever yesterday. He tested for COVID-19.( covid 19 검사를 했다) Around 10 am, he called me and said "I was tested negative for COVID-19." So I said " That is OK. I want you to take care of your health. And see you tomorrow."

At lunch time, all of my colleagues had delivery food at our office like yesterday. After lunch, my junior staff and I went to a cafe and grabbed iced-coffee. And then he came back to our office but I went to see an eye doctor. And I came back to my office.

This afternoon, I worked hard. Now, I am at my office. After a while, I will go to 예술의전당 to see 광화문연가. I hope the musical to be interesting. I am planning to write about my impression of this musical on my diary tomorrow.

Have a great night!

[shawn-hy1232]

Very Good!!

1. 'I little had a headache.- > 'I had a little headache.'

2. 'It was a sentences analysis.' -> 'It was sentence analysis.'

3. 'Two of my colleagues went on a summer vacation.' -> 'Two of my colleagues are on a summer vacation.'

4. 'He texted for COVID-19.' -> Rewrite it!

5. 'I got a negative for COVID-19 test.' -> 'I was tested negative for COVID-19.' 다음시간에 수동태랑 문장 형식에 들어가지 않는 형용사에 대해서 공부해볼게요.

6. 'I hope musical to be interesting.' -> 'I hope the musical to be interesting.'

7. 'I am planning to write my diary tomorrow about feeling after watching the musical.' -> 'I am planning to write about my impression of this musical on my diary tomorrow.'

[hichunhee]

1. He texted for COVID-19.' -> Rewrite it!

   He te"s"ted for COVID-19.

   눈에 이제서야 보이네요;; 솔직히 3번 고쳤어요. ^^