[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 24일 Sat.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today, I had to go to Talk-Talk. So, I woke up early.

It was scorching today. So I took a shower. And I did my laundry. I didn't fully practice reading my textbook last night. So, I practiced reading my textbook out loud for about 1 hour.

Around 9 am, I got dressed and wore my cap. And I walked to Talk-Talk. It took 30 mins to go Talk-Talk. I was little sweating. So, I bought some iced coffee. I took English class for 2 hours. At the beginning of the class, I read my diaries as usual. And Shawn explained me his comments in detail. While I was learning English, I thought that I want to speak English like Shawn. I learned about the active form and the passive form. The time went by quickly. I wished (that) it was longer.

After the class, I went to see my dermatologist by subway. And I came back home.

I made some food. To be honest, I don't lwnat to make food. But, I had to make food for my dad. Around 8 pm, I drove to my dad house. And I gave my dad some food. I drove back home.

I did my homework. It was sentence analysis. Sometimes, I am (get) confused with part of speech. After I do my homework. I am going to send a text message to Shawn tomorrow.

Now I am writing this diary, while I am drinking a can of beer. Uh, I want to sleep well tonight.

Enjoy your weekend.

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Memo

1. I found some problems "with" or " on " this documents
2. He seems to work hard.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Today, I have to go to Talk-Talk.' -> 'Today, I had to go to Talk-Talk.'

2. 'I learned about the active form and passive form.' -> 'I learned about the active form and the passive form.' or 'I learned about the active and passive form.'

3. 'So, it was a shame for me.' -> Why?

4. 'I didn't like to make food.' ->

5. 'But, I have to make food for my dad.' -> 'But, I had to make food for my dad.'

6. 'I was confused with part of speech.' -> 'I am confused with part of speech.' or 'I get confused with part of speech.'

7. 'After I am going to do my homework. I am going to text message to Shawn tomorrow.' -> Rewrite it!

8. 'Now, I am writing this diary. While I am drinking a can of beer.' -> Rewrite it.

[hichunhee]

1. So, it was a shame for me.-> So it was so sad to stop learning English. (영어수업시간이 빨리 지나가서) 아쉬웠다. 라는 표현인데 뭐가 맞는지 모르겠어요.

2. I didn't like to make food.' -> I don't like to make food.

3. 'After I am going to do my homework. I am going to text message to Shawn tomorrow.' ->

   After I "do " my homework, I am going to " send a " text message to Shawn tomorrow.

4. Now, I am writing this diary. While I am drinking a can of beer.'

   Now, I "write" this diary. While I am drinking a can of beer.

[shawn-hy1232]

1. 'So, it was a shame for me.' -> 'I wished (that) it was longer.'

2. 'I didn't like to make food.' -> 'I didn't want to make food.'

3. 'Now, I am writing this diary. While I am drinking a can of beer.' -> 'Now I am writing this diary, while I am drinking a can of beer.'