[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 25일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Even though it was Sunday, I woke up early as usual.

I drove to my office. I parked my car in the parking lot. And I went to the 9th floor by an elevator. There was nobody. I turned on the air conditioner. I studied English at my seat. And then I scanned my homework. For a moment, I hesitated. But I sent the scanned folder to Shawn. And I sent a text message to him. I said, "I want my homework to be checked in your free time. And have a nice weekend."

Around an hour later, suddenly my junior staff came to work. I was surprised. He wore casual clothes. So he looked comfortable. I grabbed iced-coffee and some sandwichs from The Twosome Place. We had them for lunch.

Around 2pm, he got off work. But I stayed. I checked my diary's comments on my phone. Shawn's comments was informative. So I took notes of his comments in detail. And then I left my office. I drove back home.

I am going to study the passive form after I finish writing this diary.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'The air conditioner was turned on by me.' -> 'I turned on the air conditioner.' 불필요하게 수동태를 사용하면 안되요.

2. 'by a scanner.' -> Cross it out.

3. 'For a moment, I agonized' -> 'For a moment, I hesitated.'

4. 'sented' -> 'sent'

5. 'The message was "I want my homework to be checked at your rest time. And you have a nice weekend."' -> 'I said, "I want my homework to be checked in your free time. And have a nice weekend."'

6. 'I was surprised to see him come to work.' -> 'I was surprised.'

7. 'He wore a casual clothes.' -> 'He wore casual clothes.' cloth (단수) -> clothes (복수)

8. 'But I still stayed at my office.' -> 'But I stayed.'

9. 'Shawn's comments was detailed.' -> 'Shawn's comments was informative.'

10. 'So, I took them notes in detail too.' -> 'So I took notes of his comments in detail.'

11. 'And then I got off my office.' -> 'And then I left my office.'

12. 'I finish to write this diary.' -> Rewrite it!

    What do you mean by 'the positive form'?

[hichunhee]

1. I finish to write this diary.' -> I finish "writing" this diary.

2. What do you mean by 'the positive form'? --> the passive form ^^ typo

3. 'I turned on the air conditioner.' 불필요하게 수동태를 사용하면 안되요. -> 넵 ! ^^