shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'I didn't care about my homework these days.' -> 'I didn't do my homework for several days.'
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'But the doctor told me not to drink coffee and all alcohols.' -> Very good!
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'a few times.' -> 'several times.'
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'So I am eating medicine.' -> 'So I am taking medicines.'
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'I didn't know what the problem.' -> 'I didn't know what the problem was.'
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'I came back my place' -> 'I came back to my place'
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'Tow hours later,' -> 'Two hours later,'
일기 고치신 후에 읽는것도 연습해오세요~
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
It was sunday today. I woke up at 9AM and I took a shower and I went to Talk-Talk. I took a class for two hours. I didn't do my homework for several days. I want to do well. After the class, I met my boyfriend near Talk Talk. So we had for 복국 for lunch. After lunch, I wanted to drink coffee. But the doctor told me not to drink coffee and all alcohols. Last week, I went to the hospital several times. So I am taking medicines. I didn't know what the problem was. But I was feeling better today. Anyway, I came back to my place and I ate ice cream. And I took a nap. Two hours later, I woke up. And I cleaned my house and I had 짜장면 for dinner.