[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 26일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work as usual. This week, all of my colleagues are going to be busy.

My team is auditing by a accounting firm and another team is going to be permitted by Daegu city hall.

This morning, three accountants visited our office to do a audit Partner accountant always bought some coffee for our colleagues on the first day of the audit. (직원들을 위해서 감사 첫날에는 커피를 사온다) He has a good manners. One of them greeted each other for the first time. They asked my junior staff to bring many data. The audit is going to finish this Wednesday. At lunch time, two of the accountants had delivery food but one of them didn't eat. He is on a diet. So he ate only Iced-Americano.

Now, it is 5 pm. All of the accountants got off work. It was the first time for the accountants to get off this early. Because they usually get off work at 9 pm. My junior staff and I are going to get off work, after we clean up our desk.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'My team is auditing by a accounting firm' -> ??

2. 'another team is going to be permitted by Daegu city hall.' -> ??

3. 'to do a audit' -> 'to audit'

4. 'Partner accountant always bought some coffee for our colleagues on the first day of the audit.' -> Rewrite it!

5. 'He has a good manners.' -> Rewrite it!

6. 'One of them greeted each other for the first time.' -> Rewrite it!

7. 'The audit is going to finish this Wednesday.' -> Rewrite it!

8. 'two of the accountants had delivery food but one of them didn't eat. He is on a diet. So he ate only Iced-Americano.' -> Rewrite it!

9. 'All of accountants got off work.' -> 'All of the accountants got off work.'

10. 'It was frist time.' -> 'It was the first time for the accountants to get off this early.'

11. 'Wow, So my junior staff and I are going to get off work, after we clean up on our desk.' -> 'My junior staff and I are going to get off work, after we clean up our desk.'

[hichunhee]

완죤 충격이네요. T.T

1. to do a audit' -> 'to audit' 저는 명사로 audit를 사용해서 do 동사를 같이 사용했는데 틀린건가요?

2. Partner accountant always bought some coffee for our colleagues on the first day of the audit.' -> " The " partner accountant always bought some coffee for our colleagues on the first day of the audit.'

3. He has a good manners -> He is a good manner. Or He's manner is good.

4. One of them greeted each other for the first time.' -> One of them greeted with me for the first time. (한명은 처음으로 인사를 나누었다 입니다만.. 틀린것 같아요)

5. The audit is going to finish this Wednesday.' -> The audit is going to "be finished " this Wednesday. ( 괜히 배우지도 않은 진행형을 써서 ;;; 급 후회중입니다)

6. two of the accountants had delivery food but one of them didn't eat. He is on a diet. So he ate only Iced-Americano.

   -> two of the accountants had delivery food but one of them didn't eat" delivery food". He is on a diet. So he " only (부사 위치?)drank" Iced-Americano.'

7. My team is auditing by a accounting firm' -> 내가 있는 팀은 회계법인으로부터 회계감사를 받고 있다.

8. another team is going to be permitted by Daegu city hall.' -> 다른 팀은 대구시청으로부터 인가를 받을 예정이다. 입니다만

   7번과 8번. 그냥 바쁘다 라고 할껄..
   왜 어려운 단어와 시제를 써가면서 틀렸을까요? ;;; I am not in a good mood.