shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'At noon, my boss told me to have lunch with.' -> 'At noon, my boss told me to have lunch with him.'
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'We walked to lunch.' -> 'We walked to a restaurant.'
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'I took on the train now.' -> 'I am on the subway train now.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 7:30AM. It was hot today. I went to work at 9:30AM and I checked the email. I didn't go to work for 3 days last week. So a lot of things were waiting for me. At noon, my boss told me to have lunch with him. We walked to a restaurant. We wanted to eat a burger but the burger restaurant was closed. So we walked again and we had 순대국밥 for lunch. We talked about a lot of things. I was exhausted these days. I think my boss was the same too. After lunch, we went to 공차 and we ordered drinks. And we took out the tea and we came back to our office. I have a meeting on wednesday. So I am busy again. At night, I got off work at 8:45PM and I am on the subway train now. It is a good time to write a diary.