[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 27일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work.

As soon as I got to my office, I turned on the air conditioner. I usually don't have breakfast. Instead of breakfast, I drank milk today. There was nobody, so I practiced reading my textbook for about an hour. Because I had to go to Talk-Talk in the afternoon.

My office is on the 9th floor. Sometimes I walk up the stairs, while I read my textbook.

This morning, I calculated tax. It was difficult and complicated. So I didn't finish it today. My junior staff and I were busy working. We didn't have time to have chat with our colleagues.

Around 10 am, the three accountants came to work like yesterday.

At lunch time, all of my colleagues and all of the accountants had delivery food. I read my diary over the meal. But I was shocked. Shawn told me to rewrite a lot of sentences. After reading his comments, I got stressed out. But I thought over the wrong sentences and I rewrote them.

This afternoon, I worked hard. I got off work at 6 pm. I rushed to the subway station to catch the train. I went to Talk-Talk to study English. At the beginning of the class, I read Shawn my diaries as usual. And Shawn explained me his comments in detail. I learned about the passive form and the present participle form. Today, we didn't cover our textbook. So I have to do a lot of homework until next class. Anyway, I am so happy to learn English with Shawn. Now, I am very tired. I am going to bed now.

Sweet dream!

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I got my office' -> 'I got to my office.'

2. 'Instead of breakfast I drank milk today.' -> 'Instead of breakfast, I drank milk today.' 부사적 용법인 전치사구를 문장 앞에 적는다면 comma를 항상 넣어주세요.

3. 'My office is the 9th floor.' -> 'My office is on the 9th floor.'

4. 'while I am reading my textbook.' -> 'while I read my textbook.'

5. 'Shawn wrote a lot of that " Rewrite it!".' -> 'Shawn told me to rewrite a lot of sentences.'

6. 'I got stressed.' -> 'I got stressed out.' (stress out이라는 동사구를 과거분사로 만들어 stressed out 이라는 형용사가 된것입니다.)

7. 'I harried to take the subway.' -> 'I rushed to the subway station to catch the train.'

8. 'So I go to bed.' -> 'I am going to bed now.' (확정된 미래) 나 이제 자러간다.