[Rita] - 2021년 7월 27일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late. I was tired. I walked to 합정station and I took the train. On the way to work, I wrote a diary a litte bit and I got a text from my co-worker. He went to the felid in the morning. Because He had to install the furniture in the client house but the client wanted another type of furniture. I didn't understand because the client liked the furniture last week. So I ordered a different furniture.

Anyway, I went to work at 11AM. I didn't eat lunch because I had no appetite. So I worked. At night,I got off work at 10:30PM. I have to wake up tomorrow morning. So I can't wait to go home. I am going home now !

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I took on the train.' -> 'I took the train.'

2. 'from co-worker' -> 'from my co-worker.'

3. 'the other type furniture' -> 'another type of furniture.'

4. 'the client was liked the furniture last week.' -> 'the client liked the furniture last week.'

5. 'I finally odered the other type furniture.' -> 'So I ordered a different furniture.'

6. 'I had to wake up tomorrow morning. ' -> 'I have to wake up tomorrow morning.'