[Rita] - 2021년 7월 28일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30AM. It was hard to get up early. Last night, I watched a volleyball game on TV. It is the olympic period now. I wanted to go to bed early but it was fun. We won the game. So I slept late.

I had to send the design to the client in the morning.

I got out of my house and I took a taxi. It was so cold in the taxi. I wanted to sleep but I didn't. I arrived at 6:40AM and I worked. My colleague came to work at 9AM. I got orange juice from a colleague. It was good. I think it is better to go to work early.

At noon, I had poke cutlet for lunch. I don't eat lunch at restaurants these days. So my colleague and I take out lunch at the restaurant.

After I finished everything, I got off work at 7:30 AM. I took a shower as soon as I came back home. It was still hot at night. And I ate dinner.

While I was doing my housework, my friend came to my house. My friend didn't know (that) I was at home. She tried to leave some fruits at my house without telling me. So I decided to surprise her. And we talked for a bit. After she left, I went to bed at 12:00AM.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'sand' -> 'send'

2. 'The taxi was so cold.' -> 'It was so cold in the taxi.'

3. 'I was good.' -> 'It was good.'

4. 'I don't eat lunch at the restaurant these days.' -> 'I don't eat lunch at restaurants these days.'

5. 'So my colleague and I take out lunch at the restaurant.' -> 'So my colleague and I took out lunch from the restaurant.'

6. 'After finished all everything, I got off work at 7:30AM.' -> 'After I finished everything, I got off work at 7:30 AM.'

7. 'It is hot tonight too these days.' -> 'It was still hot at night.'

8. 'And I eat dinner.' -> 'And I ate dinner.'

9. 'While I am doing the housework, my friend came to my home.' -> 'While I was doing my housework, my friend came to my house.'

10. 'She didn't know for me to stay at home. She tried to put the peach at my house. I surprised her and we talked about the current situation.' -> ??

[rita1201]

'She didn't know for me to stay at home. She tried to put the peach at my house. I surprised her and we talked about the current situation.' ->

친구는 내가 집에 있는 줄 몰랐고 복숭아를 우리집이 두고 가려했다. 나는 친구를 놀래켜줬다. 우리는 근황에 대해 이야기했다 ㅋㅋ 입니다..

[shawn-hy1232]

My friend didn't know (that) I was at home. She tried to leave some fruits at my house without telling me. So I decided to surprise her. And we talked for a bit.