[Ruby] - 2021년 07월 29일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Nowadays, I don`t sleep well. So I drank beer late last night. When I woke up, I felt bad and regretted drinking beer. And the hot weather made me annoyed and the hot weather made me take a shower several times a day.

I went to work.

This morning, I had a meeting with my junior staff. We talked about our schedule for a while. I had a lot of things to do. But I felt so lazy today. All my employees had delivery food at the office as usual. I wanted to check my diary over the meal. But Shawn did not check my diary yet. Maybe he was busy. After lunch, I walked around my office building for a while. Outside, it was really hot. So I just came back to my office and I checked my diary's comment. Shawn didn't tell me to rewrite any of my sentences. But I still had many wrong sentences. Tonight, I will think over Shawn`s comments.

This afternoon, I wrote some documents.

Now, it is time to get off work. I am going to go home.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

지금 살짝 봤는데 과거시제이어야 하는 것들이 현재시제로 되어있네요. 다시 한번 보시고 시제 틀린것들 고쳐주세요. 내일 아침에 코맨트 달아드릴게요.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I had a lot of things that I have to do today.' -> 'I had a lot of things to do.' to 부정사의 형용사적 용법. things 를 꾸며주고 있죠.

2. 'But today of all days, I hated to do it.' -> 'But I felt so lazy today.'

3. 'Shawn didn't tell me to rewrite it. Expectedly, my diary had a lot of wrong sentences.' -> 'Shawn didn't tell me to rewrite any of my sentences. But I still had many wrong sentences.'