[Rita] - 2021년 7월 29일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 8AM. It was hot last night so I got up several times. I hate summer.

I went to work at 9:30AM. I sent the design yesterday morning. So I waited for the feedback. While I was waiting for the feedback, I started another furniture design for a different project. At noon, I had 김밥 for lunch and I watched Netflix for 30mins. I have a meeting at the field in the morning. So I had to hurry.

I feel better this week. I am trying to relax my mind. Tonight, I got off work at 8:20PM. I had to work late but I wanted to go home. So I took my laptop. After I have dinner, I am going to work.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I hate in summer.' -> 'I hate summer.'

2. 'So I waited for feedback.' -> 'So I waited for the feedback.'

3. 'While I waiting for feedback, I started furniture design for different project.' -> 'While I was waiting for the feedback, I started another furniture design for a different project.'

4. 'I have a meeting at the field in the morning.' -> ?? In the morning?

5. 'I was feel better this week.' -> 'I feel better this week.'

6. 'labtop' -> 'laptop'