[Rita] - 2021년 7월 30일

[rita1201]

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I woke up at 5AM. And I took a shower and I got dressed. I had to work in the morning because I had a meeting at 2PM.

At noon, my boss and I went to the field. We had to a meeting at the field. We checked the field and we waited for the client. At 2PM, The clients came to the field. After we saw the field, we went to a cafe and we had a meeting. The meeting subject was about furniture design. We are short on budget. So we are trying to reduce costs. It is hard. But we will keep trying.

After the meeting, my boss and I went to josun palace hotel. The hotel opened a few days ago. So I wanted to see the design of the hotel. We went up to the 23floor and we drank tea. The cafe was crowded. A french designer designed this place. I was sorry about sevelal things. But it was good.

After the tea time, I got off work and I went to my boyfriend house. He moved today so we had dinner.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'And I tooa a shower and I got dress.' -> 'And I took a shower and I got dressed.'

2. 'We chaked the field and we waited the clients.' -> 'We checked the field and we waited for the client.'

3. 'We are shout of budget.' -> 'We are short on budget.'

4. 'But we keep trying.' -> 'But we will keep trying.'

5. 'The cafe were crowded.' -> 'The cafe was crowded.'

6. 'I was sorry about sevelal things.' -> ??

7. 'After tea time,' -> 'After the tea time,'