[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 01일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Even though it was sunday, I woke up early. Because I had a lot of things to do.

My son slept in with his friend in his room. Because he drank with his friend in 홍대 last night. And he came back home with his friend late last night. My husband went to play golf and he took my car, so I went to my office by subway. I am still confused with some of sentence analysis from the last class. So I reviewed those and I took notes of Shawn's comments. I don't have any confidence in English. And It is too hard to learn English. But I would like to speak English well.

I left my office at 3 pm. As soon as I came back home, my family and I drove to my dad's house. We picked up my dad and we went to a restaurant for dinner. It took an hour to go to the restaurant. We had a lamb. It was tasty and the atmosphere of the restaurant was good. After dinner, we came back to my dad's house. I dropped him off and my family came back home.

On the way back home, it was raining. So I was wondering whether I should go grocery shopping or not. Because I felt like drinking wine. But I was not done with my homework, so I didn't stop by the mart. Just now, I am done with my diary homework. But I am worried about the next class, because I have to speak.

From now on, I am going to practice speaking.

Cheer me on !

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Even though, it was sunday. I woke up early.' -> Rewrite it.

2. 'overslept' -> 'slept in'

3. 'by my car' -> 'and he took my car'

4. 'At the last class, I still got confused with sentence analysis.' -> 'I am still confused with some of sentence analyses from the last class.'

5. 'So I reviewed that' -> 'So I reviewed those'

6. 'my family drove to my dad's house.' -> 'my family and I drove to my dad's house.'

7. 'It tasted and atmosphere was good.' -> 'It was tasty and the atmosphere of the restaurant was good.'

8. 'we came back to dad's house.' -> 'we came back to my dad's house.'

9. 'I dropped off my dad then my family came back home.' -> 'We dropped him off and we came back home.'

10. 'While I was driving, it was raining.' -> 'On the way back home, it was raining.'

11. 'So I was wondering if I go to mart or not.' -> 'So I was wondering whether I should go grocery shopping or not.' (wonder whether I should 에 대해서 찾아보세요.)

12. 'But I worried to speak English next class.' -> 'But I am worried about the next class, because I have to speak.' (have to 에 대해서 찾아보세요)

[hichunhee]

1. Even though, it was sunday. I woke up early.' -> Even though it was sunday, I woke up early.

2. wonder whether I should

   • 뜻 :그럴까말까 고민하다
   • 위치: 문장의 일반동사(목적어 자리)
     "wonder whether + s +v "형태를 사용

   ** 명사절 접속사 Whether ~인지 아닌지 -> 의문이나 불확실한 사실을 나타내는 명사절을 이끈다 ->예) I don't know whether he will come or not.

3. Have to + 동사원형

   • 뜻: ~해야 한다

   • 예문 : We have to be quite on the subway.

   • don't have to : ~할 필요가 없다로 해석

   • 의문문: Do(Does)+ S +have to +동사원형