[Rita] - 2021년 8월 2일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up at 5:30AM. It rained today. I went to work at 6:30AM. I had to send a design so I went to work early. After sending the design, my boss and I went to a graphic design studio. We had a meeting at the studio. I went there for the first time and I met them too. I was curious about them. Because I usually like their design.
So we had a meeting for 1 hour. It was fun. After the meeting, we came back to our office and I had lunch. I wanted to go home ealry today. So I got off work at 7PM. My friend sent me a text. She wanted me to have dinner with her. So I went to see her. We had grilled skewers for dinner. It was good. After dinner, I went to her studio. The studio is close to my house. After friends get off work, friends usually come to studio at night late. And they make pottery. It wanted to make pottery. But I was tired today. So I came back to my house. And I took a shower and I talked on the phone with my mom and sister.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'It was rained today.' -> 'It rained today.'

2. 'After sending a design, my boss and I went to graphic design studio.' -> 'After sending the design, my boss and I went to a graphic design studio.'

3. 'I went to there for the first time and I met them too.' -> 'I went there for the first time and I met them too.' -> them?? Do you mean clients?

4. 'I curious about them.' -> 'I was curious about them.'

5. 'My friend sent me to text. She wanted for me to have dinner with her. So I went to her.' -> 'My friend sent me a text. She wanted me to have dinner with her. So I went to see her.'

6. 'The studio was close to my house.' -> 'The studio is close to my house.'

7. 'After friends get off work, friends usually come to studio at night late.' -> 이 문장은 수업때 같이 좀 볼게요.