[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 03일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early. When I woke up, I wasn't feeling tired.

I slept well, because I was really tired. I walked my dog last night and that made me really tired.

Anyway I went to work as usual. My boss had a day off, because he was getting vaccinated for covid-19 today. So I had coffee with two of my senior staffs at a cafe. They were older than me. But we are on the same rank. We talked about some issues from the last meeting. Around 11am, we came back to our office.

At lunch time, some of my colleagues and I had delivery food. During lunch time, I wanted to check my diary's wrong sentences. But Shawn did not leave any comments yet. So I walked around my office building for a while. And I just came back to my office, because it was so hot. Even though lunch time was over, my junior staff didn't come back on time without telling me. So he made me little angry. When he came back to our office, I scolded him. This afternoon, I got off work at my usual time.

I went to Talk-Talk by subway. When I got to Talk-Talk, there were people in my classroom. Shawn was teaching another student. So I waited outside for a while. After a while, Shawn and I started our class. We had a chat little bit and I read Shawn my diaries. Then he unexpectedly read me my diaries. His pronunciation was very good and I would like to speak like Shawn. I learned about adjective and sentence form number 5. It was very difficult. Unfortunately this time went by quickly.

After the class, I walked home. I was sweating, so I took a shower. After I finished writing this diary, I am going to review adjective before I forget those.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I was not bad.' -> 'I wasn't feeling tired.' 분석해 보세요~

2. 'I slept well last night, because I was tired that I took a walk with my dog last night. It took an hour to take a walk.' -> 'I slept well, because I was really tired. I walked my dog last night and that made me really tired.'

'I walked my dog last night and that made me really tired.' -> 분석해보세요!

3. 'he got the vaccination shot for COVID-19 today.' -> 잘 쓰셨어요. 문법상 오류 없습니다. 근데 조금더 어려운 문법들로 (우리가 배운 범위 내에서) 문장을 구성해볼게요. -> 'he was getting vaccinated for covid-19 today.'

4. 'We talked about that what happened from the last meeting.' -> 'We talked about some issues from the last meeting.'

5. 'my junior staff did not came back to our office and he did not contect me.' -> 'my junior staff didn't come back on time without telling me.'

6. 'When I got Talk-Talk, my(?) classroom was using by Shawn.' -> 'When I got to Talk-Talk, there were people in my classroom.'

7. 'another a student' -> 'another student.'

8. 'So I waited for my class time.' -> 'So I waited outside for a while.'

9. 'We chatted little bit' -> 'We had a chat little bit'

10. 'five form' -> 'sentence form number 5.'

11. 'It was sweating' -> 'I was sweating'