[Rita] - 2021년 8월 4일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I had to go to the hospital today. Because I had a medical checkup a two weeks ago. So I went to hear the results today. Befor going to the hospital, I went to work. I had a meeting in the morning. It was interview. The interview was to meet the freelancer for the furniture drawing. I needed more people for work. So I met her and we talked about the schedule. we have to finish the drawing within two weeks. After the meeting, I went to the hospital. After hearing the explanation, I went to my friend house. She works at home these days. because her quit the company. So I wanted to work with her. We kept working. And we had 닭발 for dinner. It was good. After dinner, we work out along the Han-river. And I came back to my home and I took a shower and I watched volleyball on TV.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I had to go to the hospital today.' -> 'I had to go to a hospital today.'

2. 'a two weeks ago' -> 'two weeks ago.'

3. 'It was interview.' -> 'It was an interview.'

4. 'The interview was to meet the freelancer for the furniture drawing.' -> 'We are trying to hire a new freelancer designer.'

5. 'I needed more people for work.' -> 'We need more people to work with.'

6. 'my friend house' -> 'my friend's house'

7. 'because her quit the company.' -> ??

8. 'we work out' -> 'we walked'