[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 05일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work early in the morning just as usual. Two of my colleagues went on a business trip to Ulsan. Other two of my colleagues went to a cafe with my boss. So my office was quieted. I like in a mood for that. This morning went by quickly.

At lunch time, all of my colleagues had delivery food in our office. I had 쫄면 for lunch. It was very spicy. I don't like spicy food. While eating little by little, I checked my diary. But Shawn didn't leave comments yet. So I watched YouTube. It was Steve Jobs's speech. I didn't understand a lot of it. So I am going to study this.

After lunch, I went down to the second floor of my office building. I walked around there for a while. And I am trying to walk up and down the stairs five times a day for my health. Because I can't go to a Gym due to COVID-19

This afternoon, I got a text message from my friend. He moved to a new company two months ago. His new company is in Busan. He said that " When I go to Seoul, let's grab some beer together. And the new company is not bad. But I am lonely." I answered that " Of course. And take care of your health " Nowadays I don't meet people because of COVID-19. So I miss old days.

Anyway, I am at my office now. After writing this diary, I am going to watch YouTube.

Have a great night !

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'This early morning, I went to work as usual.' -> 'I went to work early in the morning just as usual.'

2. 'Two of my colleagues went to a cafe with my boss.' -> 'Other two of my colleagues went to a cafe with my boss.'

3. 'So my office was quieted.' -> Rewrite it! 'quiet'는 단어 자체가 형용사 입니다.

4. 'I like in a mood for that.' -> 'I like being alone.'

5. 'While eating little by little, I checked my diary.' -> 보류

6. ' I didn't a lot of understand.' -> 'I didn't understand a lot of it.' 부사의 위치에 대해서 수업때 이야기 해볼게요

7. 'He moved a new company' -> Rewrite it.

8. 'When I will go to Seoul, I want to drink beer together,' -> 'When I go to Seoul, let's grab some beer together.'

[hichunhee]

3. So my office was quieted.' ->
   'quiet'는 단어 자체가 형용사 입니다. 넵. 왜 이렇게 썼을까요.T.T So my office was quiet.

4. I like in a mood for that.' -> 직원이 4명 외출로 조용한 분위기가 좋다 입니다만;;; 혼자는 아니라는..

5. He moved a new company' -> He moved "to " a new company