[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 06일 Fri.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Today, it was a normal day. I went to work as usual. I wore casual clothes. Because my company allows casual dress every Friday. So I wore a T-shirt and jeans. It was comfortable. This morning, I drew up some documents. At lunch time, all of my colleagues had delivery food at our office. I got a call from an acquaintance during the lunch. He said he would like to stop by my office. So I quickly finished my lunch. After lunch, I met him in my meeting room for a while.

He scheduled to meet my boss. But my boss told him "You have to wait for a few mins in my office". So he called me. And then we met and we had a chat. His scent was very good. So I asked him the name of the perfume. He said that It is Formant Signature Perfume Cotton. After a while, my boss came to the office. So they went to have lunch. I came back to my seat. I didn't check my diary at lunch time. Because Shawn didn't leave comments only on friday 2 weeks ago.

This afternoon, I got an email from Github. I read Shawn's comments. His comments made me study English more. So I am going to study this weekend.

Now, I am at my office. I am going to go home.

TGIF !

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Today, It was a normal day.' -> Rewrite it.

2. 'I wore casual.' -> 'I wore casual clothes.'

3. 'casual dress every fridays.' -> 'casual dress every Friday.'

4. 'I was comfortable.' -> 'It was comfortable.'

5. 'in our office.' -> Rewrite it.

6. 'While I was eating, suddenly I answered phone from a acquaintance.' -> 'I got a call from an acquaintance during the lunch.'

7. 'He said that he stopped by my office. So I had lunch quickly.' -> 'He said he would like to stop by my office. So I quickly finished my lunch.'

8. 'So he called me on the phone.' -> So he called me.'

9. 'to office' -> 'to the office.'

10. 'Because Shawn didn't leave comments only on friday 2 weeks ago.' -> It doesn't make sense. Rewrite it.