shawn-hy1232
commented
2 years ago Good!
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'And I took some notes of Shawn's comments.' -> 'And I studied Shawn's comments and took some notes.'
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'Only now, I understand English grammar.' -> 'I have a better understanding of English grammar nowadays.' or 'English grammar is making more sense to me these days.'
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'On the way drove home' -> Rewrite it.
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'I parked my car in underground parking lot.' -> 'I parked my car at the underground parking lot.'
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'And I am walking with dog soon.' -> 'And I am going to walk my dog soon.'
hichunhee
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early.
As expected, it was hot today. I drove to my office to study English. It took 30 mins.
There was nobody. I reviewed Shawn's comments on my diaries and I went over sentence analyses. And I studied Shawn's comments and took some notes. I have a better understanding of English grammar nowadays.(' or 'English grammar is making more sense to me these days). Especially, sentence analysis is very useful for me. So I feel grateful to Shawn. I left my office at 3 pm.
On the way back home, suddenly it rained a lot. So I was worried about my son. Because he was meeting his friend to make a picture In Shinchon. So I called him. Luckily they came back home. I drove back home. I parked my car at the underground parking lot.
I took a nap with my dog for a while. And I had dinner with my family.
Now, I am done with my diary homework. And I am going to walk with dog soon. And then I am going to practice reading my textbook.
Good night.
Memo
Be worried about / worried
We talked about lot of things. We have a lot of things to do.