shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'other of senior staffs.' -> 'other senior staffs.'
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'we kept our masks on' -> 분석해볼게요!
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'The meeting was taking an hour.' -> 'The meeting went for an hour.'
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'We came back to our office about 11 am.' -> 'We came back to our office around 11 am.'
Here is the explanation why you should use 'around' in stead of 'about'.
And I also want you to start reading and looking things up in English.
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'I was worried with him' -> 'I was worried about him'
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'Now, I am on the subway.' -> You could also say 'I am on my way home.' But the one you wrote is fine too.
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
It was an ordinary day.
I went to work just as usual. As soon as my boss came to work, he told me “ Ruby! Let`s grab some coffee with other senior staffs.” So we went to a cafe and we had coffee. We talked about our business. And we kept our masks on during the meeting. The meeting went for an hour. We came back to our office around 11am. At lunch time, I picked up some food and I went to a hospital to meet my son. Because my son got a sugery early in the morning. So I waited for my son on the first floor of the hospital. After a while, I met my son. I was worried about him but he is OK. I gave him some food and he went back home by subway. And then I took a bus and I got off in front of my office. I had quick lunch. I came back to my office to work.
This afternoon, I worked hard. At quitting time, my junior staff and I got off work. We suddenly went to a restaurant to have dinner. Because we were very hungry. There were few people in the restaurant. We ordered salad, pasta, steak and a bottle of red wine. We had a chat over the meal. This time was good. It has been two months since we had dinner last time. Around 7:30 pm, we left the restaurant and we said good bye.
Now, I am on the subway.(I am on my way home) After a while, I am going to get off at 광흥창 station.
Good night.
Memo around : time about : duration