[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 10일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work just as usual. It was a hot day.

The three employees went on a business trip to Daegu. So my office was little quite. This morning, I drew up some documents and I checked these documents several times to report to my boss. In the middle of work, I got an email from Github. So I read my diary's comments. After I read Shawn`s comments, I thought for a while. Because I am worried about speaking in English these days. He made a good point.

At lunch time, my junior staff and I wanted to have 삼계탕. So we went to 논현삼계탕 around 11:10am. We have been there three times. But there was a long line of people. So we went to another restaurant to have lunch. After lunch, we came back to our office.

This afternoon, we worked hard. All of my colleagues went to a business meeting. So I told my junior staff that he can get off work now And he got off work earlier than usual.

I got off work at my usual time. I went to Talk-Talk by subway. I have been learning English at Talk-Talk for 5 months. I took the class for 2 hours. Shawn looked little tired but his voice was cheerful. I learned about sentence analysis and present perfect tense. His explanation was more useful than usual.

After the class, I walked home slowly. Suddenly some questions for Shawn popped up in my head. I am going to ask him soon. I am very tired so I am going to bed soon.

Sweet dream!

PS. Shawn! If your time allows, I want you to call me. Because I have something to ask about my textbook's progress.

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Memo

I have a lot of things to do. I talked about lot of thing. It is going to a lot tomorrow.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I checked this documents several times to report my boss.' -> Rewrite it.

2. 'In the middle of working,' -> 'In the middle of work,'

3. 'I was in thought for a while.' -> Rewrite it.

4. 'Because I am worrying about speaking in English these days.' -> Rewrite it.

5. 'But there was a long line of waiting people.' -> 'But there was a long line of people.' (보류)

6. 'business meeting.' -> 'a business meeting.'

7. 'I allow you to get off work now.' -> 'he can get off work now.'

8. 'I have gone to Talk-Talk for 5 months.' -> 'I have been learning English at Talk-Talk for 5 months.'

9. 'I have some questions to Shawn' -> 'some questions for Shawn popped up in my head.'

[shawn-hy1232]

1. 'I checked this documents several times to report "to " my boss.' -> 'I checked these documents several times to report to my boss.'