[Rita] - 2021년 8월 9일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up late. Because I got off work late yesterday. So I went to work at 10AM. I had to meet Hanna at 10AM in our office. Hanna is a freelancer designer. She helps me to drawing a plan. We work together for the frist time. It is worried. We talked about the project for two hour. Hanna looked fine. I don't know her yet. I hope Hanna will do well.

At noon, we finished the meeting. My co-worker and I had lunch. We found a new restaurant while ago. The restaurant has a different menu every day. And it is good.

After lunch, we walked near our office. I need a vitamin D so I walking these days. For an hour later, I came back to our office. I kept working.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'in our office.' -> 'at our office.'

2. 'She helps me to drawing a plan.' -> 'She helps me draw a plan.'

3. 'We work together for the frist time. It is worried.' -> 'We worked together for the first time. So I was worried.'

4. 'two hour.' -> 'two hours.'

5. 'Hanna will do well' -> 'she is good.'

6. 'while ago.' -> 'a while ago.'

7. 'And it is good.' -> 'And it was good.'

8. 'I walking these days.' -> 'I walk these days.'

9. 'For an hour later,' -> 'An hour later.'