[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 14일 Sat **

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was little cooler than yesterday. I walked to Talk-Talk. At 10 am, I met Shawn in my classroom. He is my teacher who teaches English very well. I have been meeting him for 5 months. At the beginning of the class, I read Shawn my diary then he explained me his commnets in detail. I am always grateful for him. I learned about that clause.
During the class, Shawn requested me to do sentence analysis several times. I think that is very useful for me. At the end of the class, I asked him some questions. Finally I thanked him. I think that my English skill is little better than the last time lately and I am happy to learn English. But I still don't speak English well. So I have a lot of worries. Anyway, after the class I went straight to my office. Because I have not finished my work yesterday. I checked some documents and I sent an email to my junior staff.

I got an email from Github. So I checked my diary's comment. Shawn left comments in English on my diary. I read his comments and then I looked up some words on Naver dictionary. After looking up some vocabs, his English sentences made more sense to me. I left my office at 6 pm.

I have experienced something today. It was about English. So I will never, ever forget today in my life.

Thanks a lot Shawn !!

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Question

Shawn~ 순간 또 헷갈리기 시작했어요

I have you speak. vs

I have hard time falling asleep.

*have 가 사역동사이기에 fall(동사원형)으로 표현하면 틀리나요? (8월12일 일기 4번 코멘트)

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I walked Talk-Talk.' -> Rewrite it.

2. 'Shawn requested me sentence analysis several times.' -> Yeah, this is okay. But I guess the following sentence is more accurate. 'Shawn requested me to do sentence analysis several times.'

3. 'To tell truth, I have been interesting to learn English.' -> It doesn't make sense at all. Rewrite it.

4. 'But I don't still speak English well.' -> 'But I still don't speak English well.'

5. 'So I have been a lot of worrying.' -> 'So I have a lot of worries.'

6. 'I have understood his comments. That is making more understand to me.' -> 'After looking up some vocabs, his English sentences made more sense to me.'

7. 'I have left my office at 6 pm.' -> 'I left my office at 6pm.'

8. 'I have experienced something today.' -> 'I experienced something today.' It would have been better if you explained the thing that you experienced.

You have been using present perfect tense too much unnecessarily. You should stop that.

5형식: I have you speak.

3형식: I have hard time falling asleep.

falling asleep이 현재분사구의 부사적 용법으로 앞문장 전체를 꾸미고 있습니다. 우리가 현재분사구의 형용사적 용법은 자세히 정리를 했지만 부사적 용법은 예시를 통해 스쳐지나가듯이 공부했었습니다. ex) I spent the whole day studying English. 예전에 이런 표현 적으신적 있죠? 여기서도 studying Englsih가 현재분사의 부사적 용법으로 앞문장 전체를 꾸미는 것입니다.

5형식은 목적어가 항상 목적격보어의 대상이 되어야 합니다. You 가 speak 하는것이죠. 하지만 hard time과 falling asleep은 그런 관계가 아니죠?

[shawn-hy1232]

One more thing!

'Finally I have told thanks him.' -> 'Finally, I thanked him.'