[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 15일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up early in the morning. I went to my office. On the way to the office, I stopped by A Twosome place to get something to eat.

I reviewed my diaries that was written by me last week. And I went over Shawn's comments. From yesterday, Shawn started to leave comments in English. So I was grateful for him. His English sentences made more sense to me.

While I was studying English, I got an email from Github. So I checked my diary. My diary still had wrong sentences but I was not stressed out. Because I am very happy to learn English. I left my office at 3 pm.

From now on, I am going to write about my yesterday's experience.

Yesterday, I had pizza for lunch at my office. During the lunch, I watched a movie on YouTube by chance for a moment. I don't know the movie title. I saw one scene in movie. In the scene, one little kid was reading his diary in English. I understood his English. I was very happy so I drank wine with my son last night.

It was not a big deal. But it was important event for me in my life.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'From yesterday, Shawn's left comments in English.' -> 'From yesterday, Shawn started to leave comments in English.'

2. 'While studying English,' -> It's not wrong, but I don't want you to write like this. 'While I was studying English,'

3. 'My diary had still wrong sentences but I didn't got stressed.' -> You have to be careful with the adverb placement. The adverb, [still] has to be in front of the verb, [had]. So that it modifies [had wrong sentences] all together. And also, the tense of the helping verb and the main verb collide. So you should fix that as well. **My diary still had wrong sentences, but I was not stressed out.'

4. 'From now, I am going to write that is my experience yesterday.' -> 'From now on, I am going to write about my yesterday's experience.'

5. 'A secen of the movie is that some child read his diary in English.' -> 'I saw one scene in movie. In the scene, one little kid was reading his diary in English.'

6. 'Well I got understand that he speak in English.' -> 'I understood his English.'

7. 'Only just thing.' -> Cross it out