[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 18일 Wed.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was little cooler than yesterday. So it felt good.

I woke up early in the morning just as usual. But I didn't go to work today. Because I had to go to a hospital. So I had a day off. I went to the hospital by subway. And I had a regular check-up. The result was not bad so I made an appointment 3 months later. I came back home by subway. On the way home, I went to see my dermatologist in Shinchon.

I had quick lunch and I went to a study cafe to study English. The place is near my house. I reviewed relative clause and I studied materials in my level 2A textbook. But there were many sentences that I had to memorize. And It was little difficult. I spent the whole day studying English. But I don't remember well. I didn't have enough time to study.

I am done with my diary homework. Now I am going to review Shawn 's comments on my diary.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I made an appointment 3 months later.' -> 'So I made another doctor's appointment.' [3 months later] function as an adverb in this sentence. But it doesn't make sense. The phrase usually goes like 'I will do something 3 months later.'

2. 'I prepared my level 2A textbook.' -> What do you mean by prepare? I think you have used this phrase before and I marked it wrong. Preparing my textbook doesn't make sense. Or you should have made it more clear what preparing my textbook means. I would rather go like 'I studied materials in my level 2A textbook.'

3. 'And I didn't finish my study plans.' -> Cross it out.

4. 'I have not enough time to study.' -> 'I didn't have enough time to study.'