[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 19일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work early in the morning just as usual. When I got to work, there was nobody. So I practiced reading my level 2 textbook.

This morning, I got a report about some issues from my junior staff. I printed out some documents that I drew up. At lunch time, some of my colleagues had delivery food. I had delivery food at my office. After lunch, I went to a cafe alone. While I was drinking coffee, I checked my diary. Nowadays it is really fun to read Shawn`s comments. But I felt bad for making some mistakes. This afternoon, I was not busy. So I studied materials in my level 2A textbook then I memorized some sentences for a while. I think relative clause is very useful more than other things.

Anyway I talked on the phone with my lawyer. Becuase he replyed back to my email that I sent last week. (형식이 맞는지 잘 모르겠어요)

After a while, I am going to get off work. And I will go to Yangjae station to meet my best friend. I have known her for 20 years. It has been 3 months since I meet her last time. So I am happy now.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Nowadays I am really fun to read Shawn`s comments.' -> Rewrite it.

2. 'I think relative clause is very useful more than form.' -> Rewrite it.

3. 'We have been meeting for 20 years.' -> 'I have known her for 20 years.'

[hichunhee]

1. Nowadays I am really fun to read Shawn`s comments. ->

   Nowadays I am really fun "reading" Shawn`s comments.

2. I think relative clause is very useful more than form. ->

   I think "that" relative clause is very useful more than "another" form.

[shawn-hy1232]

1. 'It is really fun to read Shawn's comments.'

2. 'I think relative clause is more useful than other things.'