[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 20일 Fri.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Yesterday I met HyunYoung who is my best friend. We drank wine at her house in Yangjae. She is 2 years older than me. We drank two bottles and half of red wine with spaghetti. I like red wine kind of Cabernet Sauvignon. During dinner, she said “Ruby! I really want you to stop studying English please. Or I want you to study English online. Let`s play golf together ! “ I answered that I will never stop studying English at Talk-Talk. It is so much to learn English.

Anyway I went to work early in the morning just as usual. As soon as I got to work, I left some comments on my diary. Because Shawn already checked my diary yesterday and he left some comments.

This morning, I got a text message from my boss. He told me that he will get to our office little late because he is going to a hospital. And he will have delivery food at our office so he told me to order his food.

At 11 am, I had a meeting with my senior staff. We talked about law for about half an hour. I hate law because it is quite complicated. After the meeting, all of my colleagues had delivery food as usual. After lunch, I slept at my seat. While I was listening to music for little bit.

This afternoon, I was not busy like yesterday. So I wrote this diary. After about 1 hour, I am going to get off work.

TGIF.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I like red wine kind of Cabernet Sauvignon.' -> Rewrite it.

2. 'on line' -> 'online'

3. 'so many fun' -> 'so much fun'

4. 'he requested me delivery food.' -> 'he told me to order his food.'

5. 'We talked about a law about a half hour.' -> Rewrite it.

6. 'a law' - > 'law'

7. 'After meeting, all of my colleagues had a delivery food' -> 'After the meeting, all of my colleagues had delivery food.'

[hichunhee]

1. I like red wine that kind of cabernet sauvignon.' -> 나는 까베르네쇼비뇽 종류의 레드와인을 좋아한다.

   여러번 고쳤는데 모르겠어요.T.T

2. We talked about a law about a half hour.' -> We talked about law "for about" a half hour.