[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 22일 Sun.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was cooler than yesterday.

I woke up early because I was little stressed out yesterday. So I drove to my office to study English early in the morning. It took 30mins to go my office. First of all, I organized adjective in detail and I posted the bulletin board of Kakao. Second, I reviewed Shawn's comments and I took notes them.

Around 10am, I got a text message from Shawn. He told me that there were some wrong sentences on my notes. So I asked him to explain it next class. And he said OK. I had pizza for lunch at my seat. After lunch, I went over present participle and gerund. I didn't fully understand the difference between these two functions. So I needed to study them.

When I was studying, a senior staff suddenly came to our office. So I quickly left my office. Because I don't feel comfortable studying when someone is around. I came back home. I took a nap little bit. And I checked my diary. After I read Shawn's comment, I thought over his comments. English grammar is still difficult for me.

Now I am done with my diary homework. From now on, I am going to memorize my textbook.

Good night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'First of things' -> 'First of all,'

2. 'I posted the bulletin board of Kakao.' -> Rewrite it.

3. 'I took notes that.' -> Rewrite it.

4. 'He told me that my posted note has some wrong sentences.' -> 'He told me that there were some wrong sentences on my notes.'

5. 'So I made Shawn explain that next class.' -> 'So I asked him to explain it next class.'

6. 'I was confused with these functions last class several times.' -> 'I didn't fully understand the difference between these two functions. So I needed to study them.'

7. 'While I was studying, suddenly a senior staff came to our office.' -> 'When I was studying, a senior staff suddenly came to our office.'

8. 'Because I felt uncomfortable with him.' -> 'Because I don't feel comfortable studying when someone is around.'

[shawn-hy1232]

'I took notes these' -> Rewrite it.

[shawn-hy1232]

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