[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 23일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was a rainy day.

I went to work early as usual. This morning, I was sick so I went to a hospital.I spent the whole morning at the hospital. I am not sick very often so I usually go to a hospital 2 or 3 times a year.

At lunch time, I came back to my office. I had delivery food with my colleagues at my office. During lunch, I checked my diary and I read diary's comments. After lunch, I corrected my diary based on Shawn's comments. His expressions are very useful for me.

After I read Shawn's comments, I learnd a new sentence. I like that I learn a new sentence.

This afternoon, I had a meeting with my senior staff for about half an hour. He asked me some questions about law and I answered them. I guess he doesn`t know very much about our work. Now I am still sick so I can not wait to go home. But I have no choice to work until my quitting time. I worry whether I can go to Talk-Talk or not tomorrow. I would like to go to Talk-Talk tomorrow. I hope that I feel better tomorrow

That is it for today.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I spent my morning time to get treatment in the hospital.' -> 'I spent the whole morning at the hospital.'

2. 'His expression is very useful for me.' -> 'His expressions are very useful for me.'

3. 'After I read Shawn's comments, I learn new sentence. I very like this thing.' ->

First of all, you have to make your verb past tense. So it should be 'learned', not 'learn'. And also, it's not 'new sentence'. It's 'a new sentence'.

These two sentences are very ambiguous. I am not really sure if you meant that you learned a new sentence from my comments or literally you meant to say that you learned a new sentence from something else after you read my comments.

Additionally, the adverb 'very' shouldn't be used that way. You can probably say 'I like it very much.' It should be used with 'much' and placed at the end of the sentence. The better way to rephrase this sentence is to explain what 'this thing' is. Because if you leave it as just 'this thing', it is quite ambiguous.

4. 'I answered these.' -> 'I answered them.'

5. 'I guess he doesn`t know a little about our work.' -> 'I guess he doesn't know very much about our work.'

6. 'When I get up tomorrow, I really hope to be getting better than today.' -> 'I hope that I feel better tomorrow.'