[Rita] - 2021년 8월 27일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

This week, my co-workers went on a vacation. But I didn't go. Because I had to finish my work. So I will go on a vacation next week.

I finished my work yesterday. It was hard. Because the schedule has been postponed.

I woke up at 11AM. It was late. At noon, I wanted to eat a sandwich. So I went to a bakery near my house. But the bakery was closed. So, I found another restaurant. And I ate pork cutlet.

After lunch, I went to a department store and I did some shopping. It rained today. I came back to my town. And I went to a hair salon.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'This week, My co-workers went on a vecation.' -> 'This week, my co-workers went on a vacation.'

2. 'So I walked for a long time. I found a restaurant.' -> 'So, I found another restaurant.'

3. 'After lunch, I went to the department store and I went shopping.' -> 'After lunch, I went to a department store and I did some shopping.'

4. 'I came back to near my house.' -> 'I came back my town.'

5. 'And I went to thd hair salon.' -> 'And I went to a hair salon.'