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[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 27일 Fri. #704

Open hichunhee opened 3 years ago

hichunhee commented 3 years ago

It was cloudy out today.

I went to work early in the morning. On the way to work, I checked my diary. Shawn already read my diary and he left some comments on my diary last night. So, as soon as I got to work, I corrected my diary based on Shawn’s comments and I printed them out.

This morning, my boss and I had a meeting to talk about some tax issues. He was annoyed several times. He didn't listen to me. After the meeting, I rechecked tax law in detail. Then I found a solution. So I talked on the phone with my laywer. I drew up many documents. I was super busy working.

This afternoon, I didn’t have time to have a chat with my colleagues.
While I was working, I suddenly felt like drinking coffee. I asked my junior staff to go get some coffee for our employees. So I gave him my credit card. Today, the time went by quickly.

Now, all of my colleagues got off work. It was a tiring day. So I am going to go home.

TGIF.

shawn-hy1232 commented 3 years ago

Good!

  1. 'I printed out.' -> 'I printed them out.'

  2. ' about tax issue.' -> 'about some tax issues.'

  3. 'He already have angered so he was annoyed several times.' -> ??

  4. 'He didn't try to hear my word.' -> 'He didn't listen to me.' 아시는 걸로 쓰세요~

  5. 'I took note of law and I rechecked tax in detail.' -> ??

  6. 'So I specially asked my junior staff to buy some coffee.' -> 'I asked my junior staff to go get some coffee for me.'

  7. 'Therefore I gave him my credit card.' -> 'So I gave him my credit card.'

  8. 'It was hard today so I was too tired to work.' -> 'It was a tiring day.

코멘트 3, 4, 5, 6 번은 제가 계속 말씀드리는 종류의 문장들이에요. 최대한 아는걸로 간단히 쓰거나 아예 쓰지 마세요.

shawn-hy1232 commented 3 years ago

Ruby가 말을 너무 안들으셔서..ㅎㅎ