shawn-hy1232
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2 years ago Good!
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'I printed out.' -> 'I printed them out.'
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' about tax issue.' -> 'about some tax issues.'
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'He already have angered so he was annoyed several times.' -> ??
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'He didn't try to hear my word.' -> 'He didn't listen to me.' 아시는 걸로 쓰세요~
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'I took note of law and I rechecked tax in detail.' -> ??
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'So I specially asked my junior staff to buy some coffee.' -> 'I asked my junior staff to go get some coffee for me.'
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'Therefore I gave him my credit card.' -> 'So I gave him my credit card.'
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'It was hard today so I was too tired to work.' -> 'It was a tiring day.
코멘트 3, 4, 5, 6 번은 제가 계속 말씀드리는 종류의 문장들이에요. 최대한 아는걸로 간단히 쓰거나 아예 쓰지 마세요.
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
It was cloudy out today.
I went to work early in the morning. On the way to work, I checked my diary. Shawn already read my diary and he left some comments on my diary last night. So, as soon as I got to work, I corrected my diary based on Shawn’s comments and I printed them out.
This morning, my boss and I had a meeting to talk about some tax issues. He was annoyed several times. He didn't listen to me. After the meeting, I rechecked tax law in detail. Then I found a solution. So I talked on the phone with my laywer. I drew up many documents. I was super busy working.
This afternoon, I didn’t have time to have a chat with my colleagues.
While I was working, I suddenly felt like drinking coffee. I asked my junior staff to go get some coffee for our employees. So I gave him my credit card. Today, the time went by quickly.
Now, all of my colleagues got off work. It was a tiring day. So I am going to go home.
TGIF.