shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
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'We had eel around 2kg for lunch.' -> 'We had 2kg of eel for lunch.'
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'It's time to go bed.' -> 'It's time to go to bed.'
Open hichunhee opened 3 years ago
shawn-hy1232
commented
3 years ago Good!
'We had eel around 2kg for lunch.' -> 'We had 2kg of eel for lunch.'
'It's time to go bed.' -> 'It's time to go to bed.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning. As soon as I woke up, I took a shower. And I made some food for my father.
My family and I drove to Kangwhado. We got to a restaurant at 11:30 am. It took an hour and half to go there. We met my father and my sister's family. Because today was my father's birthday. We had 2kg of eel for lunch. After lunch, we looked around Kangwhado. Around 4pm, we said goodbye.
My family and I drove to my father's house. We dropped him off in front of his house. We came back home.
I took a nap. And I checked my diary. After I read Shawn's comment, I thought for a while. Anyway, I am done with my diary homework. It's time to go to bed.
Good night.