[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 30일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work as usual. My junior staff is on a vacation this week. This morning, I went to 강남 tax office to have a business meeting. I met a person who is in charge of corporate tax at 강남 tax office. And I explained some tax issues to her. The meeting went for about half an hour. After the meeting, I was not in a mood to go back to my office. So I went to Starbucks. While I was drinking tea, I checked my diary. Shawn already left comments and I read it.

I came back to my office. And I had delivery food. This afternoon, I felt lazy. So I didn't do my work. But now, I am on my way home.

Have a great night.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'My junior staff went on a vacation all this week.' -> 'My junior staff is on a vacation this week.'

2. 'I met the person' -> 'I met a person'

3. 'and I explained' -> 'And I explained'

4. 'I was not in a mood to go my office.' -> 'I was not in a mood to go back to my office.'

5. 'and I read.' -> 'so I read it.'

6. 'I was lazy' -> 'I felt lazy.'

7. 'So I didn't do my work yet.' -> 'So I didn't do my work.'

8. 'on the way to go home.' -> 'I am on my way home.'