[Ruby] - 2021년 08월 31일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

It was a rainy day. It was little chilly. And it was the last day of August.

I woke up early in the morning. I went to work just as usual.

This morning, I made some documents. In the middle of work, I got a phone call from our office doorman. He said there was someone who was positive for Covid-19 in the building. So we had to leave the building. We quickly finished our lunch and left the building at 1pm. But I didn't finish my work. So I went to a cafe that is right near "to " the office. I stayed there for a while.

I took the subway, line number 2. I got off at Shinchon station. I went to see my dermatologist. And then I walked home. I studied materials in my textbook for a while. Because I had to go to Talk-Talk. I took English class for 2 hours. At the beginning of the class, I read Shawn my diaries. And then he explained me his comments in detail. During the class, he wrote some example sentences on the board. His example sentences were very useful for me. Honestly I was amazed by his smartness. Although he didn't look tried, his voice was not energetic. So I worried about him. Anyway I think that my English got better than last month. So I am always thankful for Shawn.

After the class, I came back home by subway. Nowadays, I am little tired. But I am trying to study English hard again from tomorrow.

Sweet dream ~.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'So it felt chilly. And it was a last day of August.' -> 'It was little chilly. And it was the last day of August.'

2. 'I got the phone from a warden of the office building. He told me that "There was someone who got a positive reaction for COVID-19. And he was on the same floor. So all of your employees have to get off work just now." So all the colleagues had delivery food quickly. And all the colleagues got off work at 1 pm.' -> I got a phone call from our office doorman. He said there was someone who was positive for Covid-19 in the building. So we had to leave the building. We quickly finished our lunch and left the building at 1pm.'

3. 'that I learned about English more than last month.' -> 'that my English got better than last month.'