[Rita] - 2021년 8월 31일

[rita1201]

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I had to go to 통영 today with my friend. So we woke up at 6:30AM and we took a taxi and we went to the bus terminal in 반포. We got a bus ticket. We were so hungry. So we ate a sandwich at a convenience store for 5 mins. We can't eat on the bus because of Covid-19.

At 8am, we got on the bus and we left seoul. It took 4 and half hours to 통영. After 4 and half hours, We arrived in 통영. And we had 생선구이 for lunch. But it wasn't good. So we went to the hotel and we had lunch near our hotel. The restaurant was a seafood restaurant. It was nice. We drank three bottles of soju. After lunch, we walked to our hotel for 30mins. The road was winding. It was so hot. We came back to our hotel and we took a nap.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'we took the taxi' -> 'we took a taxi'

2. 'at the convenience store' -> 'at a convenience store'

3. 'because for covid-19.' -> 'because of Covid-19.'

4. 'At 8AM, We took on the bus' -> 'At 8am, we got on the bus'

5. 'It took for 4 and half hours to 통영.' -> 'It took 4 and half hours to 통영.'

6. 'we had for lunch again near our hotel.' -> 'we had lunch near our hotel.'

7. 'We drank soju three bottles.' -> 'We drank three bottles of soju.'

8. 'The road was winding.' -> ??

[rita1201]

'The road was winding.' -> ??

길이 구불구불했다 !