[Rita] - 2021년 9월 1일

[rita1201]

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My friends and I woke up late this morning. We went out of the hotel and we found a restaurant.

We found an oyster restaurant. And we ate a oyster rice. It was pretty good. The oysters were really small. So I think oysters in Seoul are better. After lunch, we had to go to 욕지도. 욕지도 is an island. So we had to take a boat for an hour.

We took a taxi and we went to the platform. The terminal was small and they checked our ID card. We got on the boat.

After we arrived at the island, we rented a scooter. The island is small. So we toured the island by a scooter. I was so fun. An hour later, we returned the scooter. And we ate mackerel sashimi and we drank soju by the water. It was so good. So we decided to come back here tomorrow.

[shawn-hy1232]

Nice picture!!

1. 'My friends and I woke up late today morning.' -> 'My friends and I woke up late this morning.'

2. 'We found a oysters restaurant.' -> 'We found an oyster restaurant.'

3. 'The oyster was small size. So I think the Seoul restaurant was more delicious.' -> 'The oysters were really small. So I think oysters in Seoul are better.'

4. '욕지도 is island. So we had to take a ship for 1hours.' -> '욕지도 is an island. So we had to take a boat for an hour.'

5. 'we went to a ship terminal.' -> 'we went to the platform.'

6. 'We got on the ship.' -> 'We got on the boat.'

7. 'After we arrived the island, we rented a scooter.' -> 'After we arrived at the island, we rented a scooter.'

8. '1hour later, we returned a scooter.' -> An hour later, we returned the scooter.' or (After an hour)

9. 'we drank soju in front of the sea.' -> 'we drank soju by the water.' (물가 근처에서)

10. 'So we decideed to come back to here tomorrow.' -> 'So we decided to come back here tomorrow.'