[Ruby] - 2021년 09월 02일 Thur.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

Last night, I didn't sleep well. So I was tired when I woke up. Anyway I went to work just as usual.

This morning, I talked on the phone with a person who is in charge of tax at 영등포구 office. We talked about tax for a while. I sent her a document through an email. The document was organized about tax. (The sentence is little unnatural.)

At lunch time, I had 감자탕 with my colleagues quickly. Because my colleagues didn't want to have delivery food. So we went to a restaurant. We had lunch littler(?) earlier than usual. After lunch, we came back to our office.

This afternoon, I was not busy. I have scanned my English textbook and turned it into a PDF file. And I saved it on my computer. << So I was able to pretend I was working >>, but I was actually reading the PDF version of my textbook on my computer. And I reviewed my notes about adjective that I wrote down last class. Because I promised Shawn to fully understand adjective by next class. Now I am writing this diary. After a while, I will study English soon at my office and I will try to fully understand sentences structure. I hope I can speak English well. But, nowadays I don’t have any confidence.

Have a happy evening.

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Memo

He told me to come up with examples several times

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I talked on the phone with a person. She is in charge of tax at 영등포구 office.' -> 'I talked on the phone with a person who is in charge of tax at 영등포구 office.'

2. 'Then I sent a document by an email to her. ' -> This is okay. But better way to construct it is to say "I sent her a document through an email.'

3. 'The document was organized about tax.' -> The sentence is little unnatural.

4. 'The lunch time was earlier than usual.' -> 'We had lunch littler earlier than usual.'

5. 'So I read my English textbook that is scanned on my computer.' -> Doesn't make sense. "I have scanned my English textbook and turned it into a PDF file. And I saved it on my computer. So I was able to pretend I was working, but I was actually reading the PDF version of my textbook on my computer."

6. 'And I reviewed adjective I wrote down last class.' -> 'And I reviewed my notes about adjective that I wrote down last class.'

7. 'I will try to fully understand about sentence structure.' -> 'I will try to fully understand sentence structures.'