shawn-hy1232
commented
2 years ago Good!
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'two senior staffs' -> 'two of my senior staffs'
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'at a room.' -> Cross it out.
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'since we have lunch at the restaurant last time.' -> 'since we had lunch at a restaurant last time.'
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'We talked about each of love stories.' -> 'We talked about each of our love stories.'
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'I was so fully.' -> 'I was so full.' Be careful!
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' I had a headache to solve the problem about tax.' -> 어떤 용법으로 to 부정사를 적으신거죠?
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
It was sunny today. So I felt good.
I went to work just as usual.
This morning, I was busy working. So I made many documents and I sent an email to my colleagues.
At lunch time, two of senior staffs and I went to a restaurant and we had green onion pancake and rice wine. It has been 2 months since we had lunch at a restaurant last time. We talked about each of our love stories. After lunch, we went to a cafe and we grabbed soft ice cream. I was so full. We came back to our office. As soon as I sat down, I checked my diary. After I read Shawn's comments, I laughed quietly. His explanation was well expressed. Then I corrected my diary.
This afternoon, I went to 강남 tax office again. I had a business meeting for about half an hour. I came back to my office. Actually the result was too bad so I organized that in detail on my computer. Then I sent these documents to my lawyer and my accountant. As soon as I sent an email, I talked on the phone with them. I had a headache to solve the problem about tax.
It is 7 pm, I can't go home.