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[Ruby] - 2021년 09월 04일 Sat. #714

Open hichunhee opened 2 years ago

hichunhee commented 2 years ago

I woke up early in the morning to go to Talk-Talk. I studied materials on my textbook for a while. I walked to Talk-Talk. On the way to Talk-Talk, I stopped by 광흥창 factory to buy some bread. But there was no bread that I really wanted to eat. So I just got out of there.

I took English class for 2 hours. Before Shawn and I started our class, we had a chat little bit. At the beginning of the class, I read Shawn my diaries as usual. Then he explained me his comments in detail. I sometimes make use of his comments to write my diaries and I learn basic grammar through his explanation. I learned about relative clause again. Even though the class time was already over, Shawn continued explaining. So I was very grateful for him.

After the class, I went straight to my office. I reviewed Shawn's comments. I left my office at 5 pm. Now, I am on the way to go to Shinchon station to meet my son. We have to go get some meat from E-mart. Because my son want to have meat for dinner.

Now I think about it, I didn't have lunch so I am hungry. Anyway I am so happy to meet my son soon.

Have a nice weekend.

shawn-hy1232 commented 2 years ago

Good!

  1. 'I woke up early to go to Talk-Talk in the morning.' -> 'I woke up early in the morning to go to Talk-Talk.'

  2. 'I studied materials in my textbook for a while.' -> 'I studied materials on my textbook for a while.'

  3. 'On the way to go to Talk-Talk' -> 'On the way to Talk-Talk'

  4. 'I sometimes made use of his comments to write my diary and I am learning basic grammar through his explanation.' -> 'I sometimes make use of his comments to write my diaries and I learn basic grammar through his explanation.'

  5. 'We have to go get meat to E-mart.' -> 'We have to go get some meat from E-mart.'

  6. 'it is so happy to meet my son soon.' -> 'I am so happy to meet my son soon.'