Open hichunhee opened 2 years ago
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'I woke up early to go to Talk-Talk in the morning.' -> 'I woke up early in the morning to go to Talk-Talk.'
'I studied materials in my textbook for a while.' -> 'I studied materials on my textbook for a while.'
'On the way to go to Talk-Talk' -> 'On the way to Talk-Talk'
'I sometimes made use of his comments to write my diary and I am learning basic grammar through his explanation.' -> 'I sometimes make use of his comments to write my diaries and I learn basic grammar through his explanation.'
'We have to go get meat to E-mart.' -> 'We have to go get some meat from E-mart.'
'it is so happy to meet my son soon.' -> 'I am so happy to meet my son soon.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up early in the morning to go to Talk-Talk. I studied materials on my textbook for a while. I walked to Talk-Talk. On the way to Talk-Talk, I stopped by 광흥창 factory to buy some bread. But there was no bread that I really wanted to eat. So I just got out of there.
I took English class for 2 hours. Before Shawn and I started our class, we had a chat little bit. At the beginning of the class, I read Shawn my diaries as usual. Then he explained me his comments in detail. I sometimes make use of his comments to write my diaries and I learn basic grammar through his explanation. I learned about relative clause again. Even though the class time was already over, Shawn continued explaining. So I was very grateful for him.
After the class, I went straight to my office. I reviewed Shawn's comments. I left my office at 5 pm. Now, I am on the way to go to Shinchon station to meet my son. We have to go get some meat from E-mart. Because my son want to have meat for dinner.
Now I think about it, I didn't have lunch so I am hungry. Anyway I am so happy to meet my son soon.
Have a nice weekend.