[Ruby] - 2021년 09월 06일 Mon.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I went to work. All of my colleugues had a monthly meeting at 9 am. We talked about a new project.

After the meeting, my junior staff and I went to a cafe. He came back from his vacation. We talked about our schedule. Our company need a person to work with. So we will interview an applicant this Thursday. This morning, I was busy working. Whlie I was working, I got an email from Github. Shawn already left comments on my diaries. My diary had many wrong sentences. I think I have to be more careful when I write my diaries.

At lunch time, all the employees had delivery food as usual.

This afternoon, I was still busy working. My lawyer replied my question through an email. So I went over a document in a few minutes. But I still have a question. So I posted a message on Shinmoongo(신문고)that is question about tax law.

My junior staff and I went to 강남 tax office to have a meeting again. After the meeting, my junior staff went back to the office. But I didn't go back to the office. I can't wait to go home. So I'm happy. I am getting off soon at Shinchon station.

Good bye.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'need a person who we work with.' -> 'need a person to work with.'

2. 'a applicant' -> 'an applicant'

3. 'I think I need more concentration.' -> 'I think I have to be more careful when I write my diaries.'

4. 'My lawyer replyed back my question through an email.' -> 'My lawyer replied my question through an email.'

5. 'So I went over a document in a few minutes.' -> ??

6. 'But I am still have a question.' -> Rewrite it.

7. 'So I posted a message on Shinmoongo(신문고)that is question about tax law.' -> ??

8. 'to have meeting again.' -> 'to have a meeting again.'

9. 'I can't wait go home.' -> 'I can't wait to go home.'

10. 'I can't wait go home. So I am on the subway, line number 2.' -> Doesn't make sense.

11. 'When I get home, I am able to rest.' -> Cross it out.

12. 'In a couple of mins, I get off at Shinchon station.' -> 'I am getting off soon at Shinchon station.

Too many mistakes.