[Ruby] - 2021년 09월 07일 Tue.

[hichunhee]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'an accountant.' -> 'my accountant.'

2. 'all my employees' -> Rewrite it.

3. 'I straight got off work.' -> Rewrite it.

4. 'so much.' -> Cross it out

5. 'my promises.' -> 'my appointments.'

6. 'My diary still have so many wrong sentences.' -> 'My diary still had so many wrong sentences.'

7. 'Then I practiced reading on my textbook quietly.' -> 'Then I practiced reading my textbook quietly.'

8. 'I took a headache cure.' -> 'I took a medicine.'

9. 'During the class, Shawn looked that he wasn't in a good mood.' -> This sentence is grammatically wrong. So we will just cross it out. By the way, I don't want you to talk about my feelings or whatsoever. However you feel is not in my control. But I don't think it is appropriate to mention it here publicly or send me such messages. It feels like you are invading my personal space. And I don't want any further discussions about it.