[Rita] - 2021년 9월 8일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

My vacation was over last week. So I had to go to work this week.

This morning, I woke up at 7:30AM. I was tired. Because I met an old co-worker last night. We talked for a long time. It was fun. Anyway I went to work on time. I had several calls and I kept working.

I had to take pictures at my spot with my team. The spot is an eyewear shop and it recently opened. Tonight, we went to the shop. And And we took pictures with a photographer. It took 7 hours to take pictures. We were tired. But the store looked good. So I was happy. Because I designed the store. I put in a lot of effort in this shop for several months. ㅡ We had to be really careful with moving them. Because it was expensive.

We finished taking pictures at 4:30 AM. We were satisfied with everything. I came back home and I took a shower. And I wrote an E-mail to my client. And I slept.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'My vacation was done last week.' -> 'My vacation was over last week.'

2. 'We talked a long time.' -> 'We talked for a long time.'

3. 'The spot is eyewear shop' -> 'The spot is an eyewear shop'

4. 'And we took pictures with photographer.' -> 'And we took pictures with a photographer.'

5. 'It was hord time for a few months.' -> 'I put in a lot of effort in this shop for several months.'

6. 'We moved for a few furniture and eyewere.' -> Doesn't make sense.

7. 'It was carefull to move that.' -> 'We had to be really careful with moving them.'

8. 'We finished to take pictures at 4:30AM.' -> 'We finished taking pictures at 4:30 AM.'

9. 'And I wrote an E-mail to client.' -> 'And I wrote an E-mail to my client.'