[Rita] - 2021년 9월 13일

[rita1201]

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Today was Monday. I woke up on time and I went to work at 9AM. Fall has come. So the weather is cool.

I had a meeting in the afternoon. So I prepared the meeting in the morning. I organized a lot of files for the meeting.

The meeting was sudden for me. I had another work today. But I couldn't do that untill the afternoon.

At noon, I had lunch with my co-worker. We recently found a new restaurant. So we go to the reataurant alomost everyday. The restaurant is clean and they serve different menu everyday. After the lunch, we took a walk for 20 mins. And we came back to our office. I went to 강남 with my boss by taxi. On the way to 강남, there was a lot of traffic. We got to the office in 강남 and we went to the 5th floor. The office was so quiet. We walked to the meeting room and we waited for the clients. After 10mins, We met clients. They looked calm. We talked about a new spot. It looked interesting.

The meeting was nice. After the meeting, we came back to our office. And we kept working.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'I organized for a lot of files for the meeting.' -> ' I organized a lot of files for the meeting.'

2. 'I had to another work today.' -> 'I had another work today.'

3. 'There is cleand and there come out a different menu everyday.' -> 'The restaurant is clean and they serve different menu everyday.'

4. 'we got a walk for 20mins.' -> 'we took a walk for 20 mins.'

5. 'When I was going to 강남, The road was blocked.' -> 'On the way to 강남, there was a lot of traffic.'

6. 'we went up 5foor.' -> 'we went to the 5th floor.'

7. 'we watied clients.' -> 'we waited for the clients.'

8. 'They were looked calm.' -> 'They looked calm.'