shawn-hy1232
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3 years ago Good!
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'I think I eat to much delivery food.' -> 'I think I eat too much delivery food.'
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'And I make to much plastic. So I am trying.' -> 'And I am using too much plastic. So I am trying to stop that.'
일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.
주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.
I woke up at 10AM. It was late. But I didn't care. Because I got off work late last night. I took a shower and I ate a homemade meal for lunch. I am trying to eat a homemade meal these days. I think I eat too much delivery food. And And I am using too much plastic. So I am trying to stop that. After lunch, I went to work at 1PM. My boss didn't come to our office today. He got a vaccine today.
I was so good. Because it was quite. I like mu boss but he makes a noise. 🥲 He calls all day. Of course, I am often the same.
I worked untill at 10PM. I wanted to go home by bicycle (I wanted to ride a bicycle home. 이것도 말이 되나요?)
But there was no bicycle near my office. (자전거는 제 자전거가 아니라 따릉이(공용 자전거)를 말하는 겁니다~!) So I walked to subway station and I took the train. I am going home now.