[Rita] - 2021년 9월 16일

[rita1201]

• 일기 쓰기 팁!: 일기는 간단하게 - 에세이가 아닙니다. 시제(tense)를 알맞게 써주세요! 일기는 주로 과거에 일어난 일을 쓰는 것이기 때문에 과거 시제로! 하지만 상황에 따라 다양한 시제를 사용할 수도 있습니다.

• 주의할 점!: 삼인칭 (he, she, it, 등등) 주어를 쓸 때 동사 원형에 s 붙이는 것을 주의 합니다. 항상은 아니지만 대부분 명사 앞에 관사 (article)이 붙습니다. 어떠한 관사를 쓸 것인지 항상 고민하면서 써보세요.

I woke up on time. On the way to work, I was happy. Because this was my last day of work before the holiday week. I went to work at 10AM. I didn't have anything to do today. So I organized some previous project files. At noon, my co-worker and I went near seoul forest. (서울숲) It took 20mins. Because the weather was nice today. So we wanted to have lunch near Seoul Forest. And we found a small street. It looked interesting. It looked like 'Cat Street' in Tokyo.

There were many stores on the street. Some were big and some were small. All of them were pretty. We wanted to move our office there. 😗

We walked and we found a new spot for our lunch. But All of the restaurants were packed. So we kept looking for a restaurant. and we narrowly had lunch and drank 막걸리. After lunch, we came back to our office. My feet hurt because of my shoes.

In the afternoon, I wrote a text for my project. And I got off work at 6:30PM. I said bye to everyone. And I came home by bicycle. It took 1hour 30mins. When I arrived near my house, I couldn't walk. My legs were shaking.

[shawn-hy1232]

Good!

1. 'Because I went to last work at this week, before the holidays comeing.' -> 'Because this was my last day of work before the holiday week.'

2. 'I didn't have anything to work today.' -> 'I didn't have anything to do today.'

3. 'So I arranged files of the before projects.' -> 'So I organized some previous project files.'

4. 'I went near the seoul forest.' -> 'I went near Seoul Forest.'

5. 'Because it was nice weather today. So we wanted to have lunch near the seoul forest.' -> 'Because the weather was nice today. So we wanted to have lunch near Seoul Forest.'

6. 'There was interesting and it looked like a cat street in Tokyo.' -> 'And we found a small street. It looked interesting. It looked like 'Cat Street' in Tokyo.

7. 'The street had a lot of small or big stores.' -> 'There were many stores on the street. Some were big and some were small.'

8. 'All of stores were pretty.' -> 'All of them were pretty.'

9. 'But all of restaurants had to wait for 30mins.' -> 'All of the restaurants were packed.'

10. 'So we kept looking for the restaurant' -> 'So we kept looking for a restaurant.'

11. 'and we narrowly had lunch and drank 막걸리.' -> ??

12. 'My feet were hurt' -> 'My feet hurt.'

13. 'I came to my home' -> 'I came back home.'